After the feedback from the rough cut we changed it to this. We fully changed the 2nd part as well as moving the credits to the bottom. We increased the size of the names and removed the blur on one of the shots as it made it seem like the camera lens was blurry.
Strengths:
- The credits are now more visible and
- The ending looks more professional
Weaknesses:
- The title being at the end makes the opening look like a thriller
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